Thursday, 21 March 2013

Third Person Exercise - Soldiers


The soldiers moved cautiously along the hedgerows as they emerged from the woodland.  The platoon comprised nine men, each dressed alike in camouflage clothing. One carried a sub-machine gun (perhaps an officer?) , the others all had rifles.
Their field craft was sloppy. They moved separately, but clumped too closely together with one moving up to where another took temporary cover behind a bush or in ditch.
Although they kept to the edge of the fields to avoid being silhouetted by the skyline they made progress steadily, and predictably. Walking fully upright, rather than crouching or crawling, their heads and backpacks bobbed along like balloons, occasionally outlined against the grassland as the hedge dipped.
When they came to the track that slashed nakedly across the scrubland one man called the others towards him and they huddled together below a small tree. Two or three faced outwards looking for discontinuities
The leader pointed up towards the rocky outcrop, and indicated the route they would take.
The group began to disperse with a pairs of men slipping one along each side of the track. The leader and the man without a rifle stayed back by the tree, observing the troops they had sent up the slope.
The leader was turning to the other when he suddenly jerked and backwards as if kicked by a horse, clumsily clutching at the man net to him.
As the corporal instinctively grabbed at the officer  the sound of the shot reached them, but before it echoed he was already pulling the captain into what little cover the tree provided. He heard another bullet strike the ground behind them, and then a second later the sharp crack of the shot that had sent it on its way.
He shouted urgent orders to the men spread out in the undergrowth around the track, who lay as low as possible in whatever cover they could find while staring up at the hillside searching for any sign of the sniper.


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